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How to Write a Great Research Paper

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    I am going to speak about the act of writing,
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    which is something every
    researcher has to do a lot
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    and the good news is
    that some pretty simple things
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    can make your
    written output a lot better.
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    So that's why I titled this:
    Seven simple suggestions.
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    So here we go.
    Seven simple suggestions.
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    Here's the first one:
    Don't wait: WRITE.
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    This is what mistake,
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    what a lot of people make.
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    Here is a typical plan for doing research
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    Number one:
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    Have a brilliant idea.
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    Number two:
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    Spend months doing good research to back it up
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    Number three:
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    Write the paper.
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    In last two weeks before the deadline for the conference.
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    This is a bad plan, right.
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    Here is a good plan for doing research:
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    First: have an idea.
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    Second: start writing the paper.
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    Third: use the paper as a forcing function
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    to make you do the research that articulates the paper.
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    Ok?
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    See how diferent it is?
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    Right?
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    It means you start writing very early.
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    Why is this good? Well.
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    I often find, if I spend invested months of effort
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    hacking around and writing a code and thinking
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    and I start to write the paper,
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    than I relise that some of my previous work
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    was misdirected, right?
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    It wasn't able to do useful goal,
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    certainly not for this paper
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    and I also discover
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    some key parts of the paper that need more work,
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    right.
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    So you wanna use the paper as a forcing function to learn that early.
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    It also gives you a good way to communicate with another people
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    Research is all about communication. Right?
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    If you...Maybe you are kind of person who likes work just on their own
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    in a windowless room with no lights.
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    But I like to work with other people
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    I spent a lot of time at the white board
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    If you have something written you have a new mechanism for communicating with them
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    Right?
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    Is very important is a mechanism for communicating
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    That's all along way saying
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    that really writing is not the way in which we just report research
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    for me is a way which I do research
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    and I think you should think about writing in that way.
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    It's not just the output, it's a computation
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    It's the stuff that makes research happen
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    And it's because somehow we think more clearly when we write, than when we just think.
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    At least I do.
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    So.
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    Ehm. One problem with this plan here is that it starts with this idea bit.
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    Right?
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    Where this idea come from?
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    And so..ehm...it's tempting when you looking at another peoples' work
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    to think "oh my" everybody else has very clever ideas and I am a mere worm
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    and I have such a trivial boring ideas that nobody would be interested in them
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    And do you know that feeling? Yeh?
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    You sit there and you don't feel very creative
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    Let me tell you that this is what every researcher feels most of the time
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    There are days when you have miraculous breakthrough
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    and you really know your God is in heaven and you know that all is right with the World.
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    But most of days you thing I am worm this is the natural state of the researcher.
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    Right?
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    So what you have to release is that even you know [Tarjan], and so forth, thinks that he's a worm most of the time
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    and what what the researcher do? Good researchers
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    is they simply start writing anyway, right?
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    They write a paper about any idea no matter how trivial or insignificant it may be.
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    My experiences that the clever the research student then more they prone to this failure mode
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    either they don't understand something which case they are depressed
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    well stay do undestand something which they do believe, in which case they think it is trivial and nobody would want to know about it, all right?
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    So in both cases depressed.
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    This is not a good situation, right?
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    So just write an idea no matter how insignificant it seems to be
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    because my experience consistently is that when you write the paper
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    your idea develops and ramifies computer science is like a snowflake or flower
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    you start with a little seed and its ramifies ahead of you in an interesting things
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    something looked boring turns out to be actually rather interesting
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    not always sometimes you start writing the paper and it turns out indeed to be weedy and insignificant
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    and maybe when you published it and it will be done quickly and you put it on your homepage, all right?
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    So, write early!
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    And, and and I really do believe that the second thing is much the most a common case.
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    It almost invariably turns out to be more interesting than you thought.
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    All right, number two if you gonna have this idea and wrote about it you need to be clear what it is.
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    The business of writing a paper is to convey from your brain into the minds of your readers your idea.
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    So think of your papers like, like a virus, right?
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    You trying to, you try to infect your readers' minds with your idea.
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    And then you will infect them and then they talk to another people and they will infect them
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    So it's like a kind of contagious play which is going to sweep the world
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    And everybody is been thinking about your idea because it is so well infectious.
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    Right?
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    So...ehhmm....my, my, my knowledge here with, with Mozart
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    It's just houndred of years after the Mozart died we are listening the people read his papers.
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    Or more precisely play his music.
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    Where you go to concert hall to hear his papers because
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    their ideas were so infectious
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    Don't you think that's amazing?
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    Won't it be remarkable that in four hundred years time people will still reading you papers.
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    That's not all likely
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    But I think that's the..,that's a kind of idea like to get
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    your your..the papers is not mechanism for getting promotion
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    It's mechanism for convey ideas from your head to somebody elses head
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    If you don't convey them, right, if don't bother to tell anybody about your ideas,
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    then your minds don't have them
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    Right?
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    Even if Einstein had sat in the window this box not tell anybody about relativity.
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    Then we wouldn't know relativity, right?
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    That means you need to know what your idea is. Right? So when you write a paper in the end at least by the time you finished.
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    You must know what is the idea that your paper conveys.
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    It's surprising how hard that could be to determine from people's papers
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    As a viewer if you read somebody's paper when you finish you can say:
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    "What idea did that paper convey?"
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    If you find that hard to articulate as a reader, then you know, in your view, you can say I really couldn't figure out what this what the idea this paper was about.
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    And so than you apply to your own papers, right?
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    It's actually sometimes quite hard to know exactly what your idea is to begin with.
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    But you must now by the time you finish.
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    Eeehrrr...if you find that yourself thinking, ohh..I have actually three ideas in this paper.
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    Than what you do? Just write three papers.
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    Right?
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    It's wrong to try to merge them all in. In which case each one becomes cryptic and incomprehensible. Which you try to squidge into ten pages.
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    Just write three papers, that's cool, right?
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    That's not salami slicing, that is taking ideas and expressing them.
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    A good idea in your paper is to say explicitly when you get to main idea
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    It's suprising how seldom is this happens.
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    So I often try to write phrases in my paper that say the beginning of section three somewhere the main idea of this paper is this..
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    Because I have to explain some context and set up and background.
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    And I wanted to be absolutly clear when I move from describing the context saying: here is the payload.
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    Right?
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    The viruses is about to arriving in your brain. Prepare!
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    Does it make sence? All right?
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    If you don't say that, if you leave you reader to be a detective.
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    So, subsequently they have to reverse engineer what they think you meant was the key idea. That's not good, right?
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    Why not said it explicitly, be completely up front about this.
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    Third thing: Tell a story!
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    So if you know write a paper this applies I am focusing mainly on papers.
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    But I do also mean dissertations and so forth. Everything applies everything you like really.
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    Is tell some kind of a story
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    I always try to imagine when I'm writing a paper, that I am standing a front of the white board and explain it to a colleague.
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    It's amazing how differently people present things at a white board and they will in a paper.
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    Right?
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    Without white board they start away ..??..with examples and explaining quite diffrently than if they..if they will not be out there..you you you get the idea..
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    They often explain in much more accessible and engaging way at the white board than in the paper.
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    So if you want to by accessible and engaging ......... do the same in the papers you do at the white board. Nearly.
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    You need a little have a bit more substance.
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    So here is a narrative flow that I usually try to follow with my papres. Right?
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    You want to say here what a problem is, you want to motive your readers to say way it is an interesting problem
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    You want to say at least briefly why it is unsolved problem, so be aware of solving, it is unsolved.
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    And then you want to present your idea, that's the payload, right now
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    Right?
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    And then you give quite a bit of detail
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    about exactly how what your idea is and how it works
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    Ehm... Then you want to say something about
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    how your idea compares with other people.
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    See, you are kind of trying to lead people in
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    You know, no everybody will read
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    right the way through your paper.
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    Your ideal is
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    That whereever anybody stops reading
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    they take away something valuable with them.
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    And moreover every bit they read
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    makes them want to read more, right?
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    This is back to make it accesible, right?
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    So, you know they say:
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    Ah, here is an interesting problem
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    I wish I could solve that one!
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    I wonder if he can solve it!
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    So, you know - they got a hook!
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    They incline to read some more.
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    Ehm, here is my - so, the typical outline
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    for most papers that I write
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    and indeed it works for dissertations as well.
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    A short abstract.
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    An introduction.
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    Then something about the...
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    stating what the problem is.
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    Then a quite a bit of
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    a short piece explaining what the idea is
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    kind of intuitively
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    and then a longer piece explaining the details
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    behind the idea
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    that sort of fills out the evidence.
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    Then something about relaive work.
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    And I am going to say a bit more about
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    each of these sections
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    in the following piece
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    but this is my picture of
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    how the structure of a paper might go.
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    And look at the numbers of readers, right?
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    More people read your abstract and title
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    that will read all the rest of the paper
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    so each time you want to give them a hook
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    to continue.
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    Here is what I think
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    your introduction should do.
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    One page!
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    Describe the problem briefly
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    and articulate what your contributions are.
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    So, here is some by way of example
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    Ehm, describing the problem
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    I would suggest you introduce your problem
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    with an example.
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    So, my good way of doing to say:
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    is there any typewriter fonts on the first page?
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    I am a programming languages guy
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    and programming languages people tend to
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    put example programs in a typewriter font.
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    So, I know if there is a typewriter font on the paper
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    it's probably an example.
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    That's good, right?
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    But in your fields it may differ
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    but anyway, start with an example
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    that'll ilustrate your problem.
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    So, here is an example of
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    a paper that I wrote some time ago
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    and the very first thing I did was to give
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    a little program and explain a problem with it
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    and explain that somehow
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    my paper is gonna fix this problem.
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    OK?
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    So, that's an initial hook.
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    Not a general description of a problem
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How to Write a Great Research Paper
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