Opening up the museum | Nina Simon | TEDxSantaCruz
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0:09 - 0:10Thank you.
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0:10 - 0:14I want to be real up-front about the fact
that I am an activist about this stuff. -
0:15 - 0:19I want to share with you today
the passion of my professional work -
0:19 - 0:21which is about opening up museums,
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0:21 - 0:25turning them into places that are not
just places where people come to visit -
0:25 - 0:29but where you can actively participate,
where you can connect with culture, -
0:29 - 0:33and hopefully, through these experiences
connect more deeply with each other. -
0:34 - 0:40The problem is that for most people,
museums are not seen as open spaces. -
0:40 - 0:43Museums are seen as elite institutions.
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0:44 - 0:45New York.
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0:45 - 0:47(Laughter)
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0:47 - 0:48They're seen as elite institutions
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0:48 - 0:53that serve an increasingly small
and limited subset of our population. -
0:53 - 0:56So when most people go
looking for a cultural experience, -
0:56 - 0:58they don't go to a museum.
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0:58 - 1:01We live in an incredibly
fertile creative time. -
1:01 - 1:03Look at what Luke's doing, and Ally,
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1:03 - 1:07all of the wonderful artists
and cultural enthusiasts in our community. -
1:07 - 1:10You don't have to be a professional
to be excited about culture today. -
1:10 - 1:14People are getting together
in bars to knit. -
1:14 - 1:17People are renting space
and starting businesses -
1:17 - 1:19so they can do
science experiments together. -
1:19 - 1:21The research on this is very clear:
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1:21 - 1:25throughout our country, people
are more culturally engaged than ever, -
1:25 - 1:27but they are choosing to have
those experiences -
1:27 - 1:29outside of traditional
cultural institutions. -
1:29 - 1:33That means you're way more likely
today to pick up a paint brush -
1:33 - 1:35than you're to go to an art museum.
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1:35 - 1:36Instead of going to a history museum,
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1:36 - 1:39people are doing
their own genealogical research. -
1:39 - 1:41As a museum director,
I look at this, and I say, -
1:41 - 1:45"We have to get in on this game!
These are people who care about culture. -
1:45 - 1:48They're passionate about
the things that we protect, -
1:48 - 1:50and yet, weren't staying at arm's length."
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1:50 - 1:51What is that about?
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1:51 - 1:54When I talk with
museum professionals about this, -
1:54 - 1:57I hear some interest,
but I also hear some real concern. -
1:57 - 2:00This is a quote from a friend of mine
who works for the Smithsonian. -
2:00 - 2:04She said, "I know a lot of people
who work in art museums -
2:04 - 2:08who would recoil in horror at the idea
of being inundated by Sunday painters." -
2:09 - 2:11I'm sorry, but if people
who paint on Sundays -
2:11 - 2:15aren't the core audience
for an art museum, I don't know who is. -
2:15 - 2:17(Applause)
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2:18 - 2:22Here in Santa Cruz at our museum, the
Santa Cruz Museum of Art & History, -
2:22 - 2:25we've decided we're going to open up
to participatory culture. -
2:25 - 2:26We are going to embrace it.
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2:26 - 2:30So, yes, we invite people
to paint with us on Sundays. -
2:30 - 2:33We encourage them to share
their own creative skills with each other, -
2:33 - 2:35and you know what?
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2:35 - 2:38Sometimes, that involves tools that are
a lot more extreme than paint brushes. -
2:38 - 2:40(Laughter)
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2:40 - 2:43What I want to share with you today
are just two of the ways -
2:43 - 2:45that we are opening up our museum,
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2:45 - 2:46and how it's changing
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2:46 - 2:50both our organization
and hopefully, our community. -
2:50 - 2:53The first side of this is
about active participation. -
2:53 - 2:55We don't just invite you in to come visit.
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2:55 - 2:58We expect every person
who walks in our museum -
2:58 - 3:01to contribute something
to make our museum better. -
3:01 - 3:03That means from the instant
you walk in the door, -
3:03 - 3:07you will be asked to give us a suggestion
of how we can improve the museum. -
3:07 - 3:11We've invited visitors to write poems
about objects in our history gallery. -
3:11 - 3:14And now, if you come in
on the first floor, -
3:14 - 3:15you can even bottle up a memory
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3:15 - 3:18and put it on display
for other visitors to see. -
3:18 - 3:23Over the last year, thousands of visitors
have contributed content to our museum -
3:23 - 3:26and it's beautiful, it's powerful,
and it's meaningful -
3:26 - 3:29to other people who walk in the door.
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3:29 - 3:30But I think we all know
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3:30 - 3:33that we've had experiences
with participatory public comment -
3:33 - 3:35that were not so meaningful.
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3:35 - 3:37In museums, you can see
comment books like this -
3:37 - 3:40full of repetitive boring information.
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3:40 - 3:42"Sam was here," "Jasmin was here."
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3:42 - 3:43Thank you very much.
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3:43 - 3:47I think we're all really familiar
with this kind of experience online. -
3:48 - 3:50I don't think any of the people
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3:50 - 3:53who made these YouTube comments
are dumb people. -
3:53 - 3:57What I see here is a lack
of a designed opportunity -
3:57 - 4:01to really invite them to give
something meaningful to this situation. -
4:01 - 4:04I believe that everyone of us in this room
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4:04 - 4:06has something really powerful
and creative to add. -
4:06 - 4:09I believe that everyone of us
has a story to share, -
4:09 - 4:11that frankly, everyone of you probably
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4:11 - 4:14has something amazing to share
from this stage today. -
4:14 - 4:17But I also know
that everyone of us can be banal. -
4:17 - 4:19We can all be idiots sometimes.
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4:19 - 4:23And to me, as somebody who works on
inviting participation, -
4:23 - 4:27the difference is in how we design
the invitation to participate. -
4:27 - 4:30Good design can elevate us
to share our the best selves -
4:30 - 4:33in a way that lousy design cannot.
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4:33 - 4:34Let me give you an example.
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4:34 - 4:37This is from an exhibition I worked on
in Seattle a few years ago. -
4:37 - 4:39This exhibition was about advice.
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4:39 - 4:42These were just two ways in the exhibition
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4:42 - 4:43that you could give and get advice.
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4:43 - 4:46On the left, people could put up
a question with a post-it, -
4:46 - 4:48and then, you could give suggestions.
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4:48 - 4:52People were very well-meaning
and trying to help each other out here. -
4:52 - 4:54On the right, they had constructed
a fake bathroom door. -
4:54 - 4:58You can see that mostly,
what people did was scribble nonsense -
4:58 - 5:00or write, "For a good time, call Johnny."
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5:00 - 5:03It's not like when you came
in the door to this exhibit, -
5:03 - 5:06we sent the well-meaning people
to the post-its and the fools to the door. -
5:06 - 5:10The same people did
both of these activities. -
5:10 - 5:12And the reason they interacted differently
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5:12 - 5:16was because of the design
and the tools that were given to them. -
5:16 - 5:18Here is an even geekier example.
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5:18 - 5:20This is from
the L.A. County Museum of Art. -
5:20 - 5:22They did this project a couple years ago
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5:22 - 5:24where they asked people
a question about art. -
5:24 - 5:27They gave some visitors
white cards and golf pencils -
5:27 - 5:31and gave some visitors these hexagonal,
blue cards and big pencils. -
5:31 - 5:36And what they found was that people
wrote better answers on the blue cards -
5:36 - 5:38than they did on the white.
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5:38 - 5:41Does this mean that blue
is a magical color for participation? -
5:41 - 5:43No.
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5:43 - 5:46What it means
is if you give somebody a special tool, -
5:46 - 5:47you make them feel valued,
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5:47 - 5:51you show them that you actually
care about what they going to do -
5:51 - 5:53and it transforms with they do in return.
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5:54 - 5:57And so in our museum, we think really hard
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5:57 - 5:59about how to design
those invitations to participate -
5:59 - 6:02in ways that encourage
people to feel valued -
6:02 - 6:05and to feel like they better give
something good back. -
6:05 - 6:08So when we asked people for their stories
of relationship breakups, -
6:08 - 6:10we had them post them
on this kind of wall. -
6:11 - 6:14When we invited them to share
their favorite memories of coffee, -
6:14 - 6:16we gave them coffee beans to vote with
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6:16 - 6:19so that they could smell and feel
that experience of coffee. -
6:20 - 6:24And again, when we wanted to ask
people to share love letters, -
6:24 - 6:27we gave them a typewriter to work with,
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6:27 - 6:29an unfamiliar tool that caused them
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6:29 - 6:32to slow down
and to share something different. -
6:32 - 6:35And right now, we're doing
this memory jar installation -
6:35 - 6:38where we're giving people
mason jars and craft materials, -
6:38 - 6:40and we're saying, "Think of a memory
that's important to you, -
6:40 - 6:43use some craft materials
to create a representation of it -
6:43 - 6:46and bottle it up
for somebody else to see." -
6:46 - 6:50We've had over 300 people
contribute jars in the last month. -
6:50 - 6:53And here is just one
that I took a picture of last week. -
6:54 - 6:57It says, "I remember when you were alive,
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6:57 - 7:01before Iraq and open pit burns
which gave you cancer. -
7:02 - 7:06I remember when we learned
that you died in Iraq in our arms at home, -
7:06 - 7:08I miss you, I miss you."
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7:09 - 7:12I don't think this visitor, Mark,
walked into the museum -
7:12 - 7:14expecting that he was going to
share this story. -
7:14 - 7:18But this activity and the designed
experience brought it out of him -
7:18 - 7:23and made him able to contribute
something really powerful to our museum -
7:23 - 7:25and to the other visitors
who walk in the door. -
7:26 - 7:30This kind of participation isn't
just changing the content of the museum, -
7:30 - 7:35it's changing the way that visitors
see themselves as creative agents. -
7:35 - 7:38We've had a lot of positive response to
what we've been doing over the last year, -
7:38 - 7:41but one of my favorite quotes
came from a teenager who said, -
7:41 - 7:44"We've been to famous art museums
all over Europe, -
7:44 - 7:47but this is the first exhibit
that makes me want to do art." -
7:48 - 7:49I looked at that, and I'm thrilled
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7:49 - 7:52not just because we turn somebody
onto culture in a different way -
7:52 - 7:56but because this is somebody
for whom the museum has become relevant. -
7:56 - 7:59This is somebody who is going
to get more involved. -
7:59 - 8:02And over the last year, we've seen this
happen again and again. -
8:02 - 8:04Just with one year of participation,
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8:04 - 8:07we've totally changed
what's happening in our museum. -
8:07 - 8:11So, from last year to this year,
our attendance has more than doubled, -
8:11 - 8:14our busiest day has more than tripped,
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8:14 - 8:16and we went from tenuous,
financial position, -
8:16 - 8:19one so bad that you can't even see
how much cash we had -
8:19 - 8:20at the bottom of that chart
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8:20 - 8:22(Laughter)
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8:27 - 8:29to a stable place that we can grow on.
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8:30 - 8:32By doing this kind of participatory stuff,
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8:32 - 8:34we are not just making
the museum exciting, -
8:34 - 8:37we are making it
sustainable for the future. -
8:37 - 8:40You might look at all this and wonder,
"But what about the objects?" -
8:40 - 8:42Aren't museums
fundamentally about artifacts? -
8:42 - 8:45And yes, we still have
stuff at our museum. -
8:46 - 8:50The next side of this I want to talk about
is how we are transforming our artifacts, -
8:50 - 8:53starting to look at them as opportunities
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8:53 - 8:55to mediate conversations
between strangers. -
8:56 - 8:58To you an example,
let's go outside the museum. -
8:58 - 9:01How many people here own a dog? OK. Great.
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9:01 - 9:03So you've all had this experience:
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9:03 - 9:07you're out walking your dog in public
and a stranger comes up and talks to you. -
9:07 - 9:09They're not really
talking directly to you; -
9:09 - 9:11they're talking through the dog to you.
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9:11 - 9:15The dog has become this safe social object
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9:15 - 9:18that mediates an encounter
that otherwise wouldn't happen. -
9:18 - 9:21As a museum designer,
I am really curious about this: -
9:21 - 9:24how could we make
museum artifacts more like dogs? -
9:24 - 9:25(Laughter)
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9:25 - 9:27I'm serious.
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9:27 - 9:30How could we make them
opportunities for conversations -
9:30 - 9:32that otherwise wouldn't happen?
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9:32 - 9:37Because the kinds of social experiences
that people can have around museum objects -
9:37 - 9:40are bigger than the ones
we have around our dogs. -
9:40 - 9:42When you're walking down the street,
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9:42 - 9:45you don't start having
a conversation with a stranger -
9:45 - 9:47about what it's like to be in the military
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9:47 - 9:49like these people are
as they're looking at art work. -
9:49 - 9:53When you're in the mall, you don't have
a conversation about racial inequity -
9:53 - 9:56as these teenagers are
as they look at stacks of money -
9:56 - 10:00representing income disparity
between whites and blacks in the U.S. -
10:00 - 10:04Museum artifacts have the power
to expose the big conversations -
10:04 - 10:07we have to be having
about where we have been, -
10:07 - 10:09where we are now,
and where we going to go. -
10:09 - 10:12So again, at our museum,
we think really carefully -
10:12 - 10:15about how to bring to life
the conversations -
10:15 - 10:17that can happen around these objects;
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10:17 - 10:19whether that's through a craft activity
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10:19 - 10:21that gets people deeply
involved with the work -
10:22 - 10:26or an activity that invites them to select
which objects belong in the museum -
10:26 - 10:29and which ones aren't
relevant to our community. -
10:30 - 10:33Some museums don't even give you
a comfortable opportunity -
10:33 - 10:35to sit down and talk about
the objects on display. -
10:36 - 10:40We're really serious about this,
so we even do things like design games -
10:40 - 10:42that invite people
to engage more with the work. -
10:42 - 10:46And yes, all of these activities help
people connect with the artifacts -
10:46 - 10:47and learn more about them.
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10:47 - 10:50But more importantly, to me,
they help them connect with people -
10:50 - 10:53who are not like them
and learn more about each other -
10:53 - 10:56because we all know
how a powerful social object -
10:56 - 10:59can bridge a gap
that otherwise we won't cross. -
11:00 - 11:05And that leads me to my last point
which is that when do we this work, -
11:05 - 11:07when we invite people to participate,
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11:07 - 11:09when we see objects
as loci of conversation, -
11:09 - 11:12we can transform museums
from things that are nice to have -
11:12 - 11:16that things that are really necessary
to move our communities forward. -
11:16 - 11:18It isn't just happening
here in Santa Cruz, -
11:18 - 11:22it's happening all over the world,
in Toronto at the Ontario Science Center -
11:22 - 11:26where they are inviting visitors
to invent solutions to global problems. -
11:26 - 11:29It's happening in Minneapolis
at the Institute of Art -
11:29 - 11:32where every ten years,
they have an exhibit where they say, -
11:32 - 11:35"Anybody and everybody in the community
can bring in a small artwork, -
11:35 - 11:38and we will hang it on the wall
of a world class museum." -
11:38 - 11:40It's happening
at the Brooklyn Museum of Art, -
11:40 - 11:43where we're using technology
to experiment with new ways -
11:43 - 11:45for people to engage
with artifacts and with each other. -
11:45 - 11:48Again, when I look
at any of these examples -
11:48 - 11:49what I'm looking at are the people.
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11:49 - 11:53So when people at my museum
are doing a craft activity together, -
11:53 - 11:55I don't just see people
who are cutting up magazines, -
11:55 - 11:58I see people who come from
different walks of life, -
11:58 - 12:01who've been brought together
through a cultural experience. -
12:01 - 12:03In Santa Cruz, perhaps
one of the most powerful experiences -
12:03 - 12:06we're having with that
is happening outside the museum -
12:06 - 12:08at a historic site called
Evergreen Cemetery. -
12:09 - 12:13About a year ago, the museum teamed up
with the homeless service center, -
12:13 - 12:17and every Monday, museum volunteers
and homeless volunteers come together -
12:17 - 12:21to restore this important,
historic site for Santa Cruz. -
12:21 - 12:25And yes, it's incredible that they are
beautifying it, and making it safe, -
12:25 - 12:27they are literally uncovering history
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12:27 - 12:30as they reveal gravestones
of Santa Cruz's founders. -
12:31 - 12:33Everybody who comes out
and works at Evergreen -
12:33 - 12:35has a powerful experience with history.
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12:35 - 12:38But more importantly,
everybody who comes out to Evergreen -
12:38 - 12:41has a powerful experience
with somebody who is not like them, -
12:41 - 12:45somebody who they might be
fearful of in another situation. -
12:45 - 12:49And it's this kind of social bridging
that culture can do -
12:49 - 12:52and can do so powerfully
and so importantly for us today. -
12:52 - 12:55I want to leave you
with just one last story of that kind, -
12:55 - 12:58a really special thing for me
that happened at the museum. -
12:58 - 13:01A couple of months ago,
we had this space set up -
13:01 - 13:03where people could make
collages in the museum. -
13:03 - 13:06I walked through, and I saw
this pretty typical museum scene. -
13:06 - 13:08In the background,
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13:08 - 13:11you have four young adults, Chicanos,
who are making collages, -
13:11 - 13:14and in the foreground,
you have a separate group, -
13:14 - 13:17one of our staff member, Stacey,
who is meeting with an artists named Kyle, -
13:17 - 13:20and there is his baby just looking cute.
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13:20 - 13:23So two separate groups
doing their thing in a museum. -
13:23 - 13:25But the next time I walked through,
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13:25 - 13:28I realized that, "Oh my gosh!
These girls have gotten up, -
13:28 - 13:32and the baby and the collages,
two great social objects, -
13:32 - 13:36have mediated a conversation
between completely strangers -
13:36 - 13:40about making art, about being a parent,
about making a child. -
13:41 - 13:43And then, the thing that happened next--
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13:43 - 13:45and I wish I had a picture of this--
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13:45 - 13:49the next time I walked through,
Kyle has handed his baby to these girls, -
13:49 - 13:51and they are sitting and making collages,
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13:51 - 13:54and he is continuing
his conversation with Stacy. -
13:54 - 13:56(Applause)
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13:56 - 13:59I know! I thought to myself,
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13:59 - 14:01"My god, if our museum
can be the kind of place -
14:01 - 14:04where somebody will willingly give
their baby to a stranger" -
14:04 - 14:06(Laugher)
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14:06 - 14:10then we are doing a lot to overcome
fear and divisiveness in our community. -
14:11 - 14:13We live in a really divided world,
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14:13 - 14:16politically, economically, culturally.
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14:16 - 14:20I feel that we desperately
need places that allow us -
14:20 - 14:23to have positive interactions
with people who are not like us. -
14:24 - 14:27The ultimate measure of what we're doing
right now at the Museum of Art &History -
14:27 - 14:30is not about the experiences
that happen inside the museum. -
14:30 - 14:33It's about how those experiences transform
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14:33 - 14:36the ones that people have
when they go outside. -
14:36 - 14:41I dream of a time when all of you
can come participate in our museum, -
14:41 - 14:44can connect with culture, and can walk out
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14:44 - 14:47and have a better connection
with somebody else on the street. -
14:47 - 14:50I dream of a time
when you will walk down the street, -
14:50 - 14:52and you will look around, and you'll say,
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14:52 - 14:54"Gosh, this is our community."
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14:54 - 14:56You look at a stranger
who is walking towards you, -
14:56 - 14:59and you won't think,
"I'm going to ignore that person," -
14:59 - 15:01or, "Well, I should turn away
and go the other way. -
15:01 - 15:04Instead, you'll get excited
because you'll say, -
15:04 - 15:07"I'll collaborate with this person.
I want to get to know that person." -
15:07 - 15:10You may not hand them your baby,
there on the street -
15:10 - 15:11(Laughter)
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15:11 - 15:13but don't worry.
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15:13 - 15:16You can come to our museum and do that.
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15:16 - 15:17Thank you.
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15:17 - 15:18(Applause)
- Title:
- Opening up the museum | Nina Simon | TEDxSantaCruz
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This talk was given at a TEDx event using the TED conference format but independently organized by a local community. Learn more at http://ted.com/tedx
Nina comments on opening up museums to participatory culture to change organizations and the community. She said that giving people special tools to participate will encourage people to feel valued. She sees artifacts as social objects in museums.
Nina Simon is Executive Director of the Santa Cruz Museum of Art & History (MAH), which has gone through a radical transformation over the past year to become a thriving central gathering place. Opening up the MAH to the community has more than doubled attendance and introduced new levels of collaboration, dynamism, and relevance to the museum. Simon teaches radical exhibition design in the University of Washington Museology graduate program and writes the popular blog Museum 2.0. Her 2010 book, The Participatory Museum, was named "a future classic of museology" and is used as a text in cultural organizations and graduate programs internationally. Previously, Simon worked as an independent consultant to over 100 museums and cultural centers around the world, focusing on participatory community engagement. She served as curator at The Tech Museum of Innovation in San Jose, Calif., and was the Experience Development Specialist at the International Spy Museum in Washington, D.C.
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• 5. 0:09 and elsewhere:
please consider how to break lines throughout the transcript to make the lines more balanced in length and/or to keep linguistic "wholes" together (e.g. keep words like "on", "that", "and", "or" in the same line as the clause that it introduces as a relative pronoun). To learn more about why and how to break subtitles into lines, see this guide on OTPedia: http://translations.ted.org/wiki/How_to_break_lines
Here, 'I want to be real" is not the same as "I want to be real up-front about" something
• 6. 0:09 and elsewhere:
Please consider creating 2-line subtitle cells by combining two separate 1-line subtitle cells, with a total run of up 7 seconds.
• 7. 0:21 and elsewhere:
Please do not start or end a subtitle too early or late after the speaker said that bit.
Please see more on how to synchronize subtitle breaks with the content of the video: http://translations.ted.org/wiki/How_to_break_lines#Synchronize_subtitle_breaks_with_the_content_of_the_video
• 0:25 and elsewhere:
On punctuation, please note that if AmE punctuation is to be used, then using the Oxford comma is also recommended.
"I eat chips, cheese, and eggs" instead of "I eat chips, cheese and eggs"
See more http://translations.ted.org/wiki/English_Style_Guide#Punctuation
• 0:29 and elsewhere:
Please note, that in terms of punctuation, adverbs that are put behind the direct object or other full clauses should he separated by a comma.
• - don't use 'now' at the beginning of a line: fluff word
• Also, at same 0:34: Use a comma before the subject "museums"
• 11. 0:45 and elsewhere:
(laugh)-->(Laughter)
See more http://translations.ted.org/wiki/How_to_use_sound_representation#Common_sound_representation
• 12. 0:46 Reading rate shouldn't exceed 21 characters / sec; lengthen duration, reduce text or split the subtitle.
Denise RQ
• 13. 0:53 and elsewhere:
Please always do another run of the video, checking for typos, misheard words, or missing ones.
(here: for cultural experience -->for a cultural experience)
• Please do not add commas where they are not needed. (1:06)
• 3:06 we invite-->we've invited
• 3:29 we had--> we've had
• 3:50 You Tube-->YouTube
• 4:54 most people did
with scribble nonsense were to write --->mostly,
what people did was scribble nonsense
• 5.21 when I asked people->where they asked
• 14. Do not use capitalization to indicate or intonation.
See 5.41 and this links explaining more:http://translations.ted.org/wiki/How_to_use_sound_representation#Shouting.2C_whispering
• 5:50 transforms-->it transforms
• 6:08 walls-->wall
• 6:10 we invited-->when we invited
• 6:16 feel about experience-->feel that experience
• 6:23 lack of proper comma can drastically change meaning:
a typewriter to work with, a tool that" is not the same as "to work with an unfamiliar tool"
• 6:37 Please capitalize a quote and use a comma before citing:
saying "think of a.."--> saying, "Think of a ..."
• 6:40 create representation-->create a representation
• 6:46 we had--> we've had
• 7.22 to other visitors-->to the other visitors
• 7:25 content of museum--> content of the museum
• 7:52 for whom museum-->for whom the museum
• 8:40 Art museum is fundamentally--> Aren't museums ...?
• 8:50 an opportunities ?
• 8:55 I'll give you an example. --> To give you an...
• 9:02 and stranger--> and a stranger
• 9:08 There's sort of --> they're ..
• 9:10 this kind of safe social objects -->this kind of safe social object
Please NOTE: BY NOW, this is a recurrent issue: lack of the indefinite article ( a, an); also, an adj in singular cannot accompany a noun in plural and the other way around
• 9:18 I really curious--> I am really ..
• 9:20 Please note that a question ends in a question mark
• 9:29 idem
Denise RQ
• 9:46
like these people as--> like these people are as...
• 9:49 Please use capitalization when you start a new sentence
• 10.21 activity that invite them-->activity that invites them
• 10:32 about art objects-->about the objects
• 10:52 how powerful --> how a powerful
• 11:06 see objects as locus--> see objects as loci ( please use plural) *Note: even if she does say "locuses"
• 11:28
they've an exhibit what they say-->they have an exhibit where they say,
• 11:34 this is not a valid verb tense in English: "will hanging it"
• 11.34 of world class museum.-->of a world class museum."
• 11:39 we're using --> THEY're using
Denise RQ
• 11:55 who "have been brought together" weren't the 'walks of life' but the 'people'; please use the comma
• or use 'who'
• 12:13 Monday museum volunteers (?)--> (every) Monday, museum volunteers
• 12:17 historical-->historic
• 12:58 couple of months--> a couple of months
• 13.00 No punctuation at the end of the subtitle
• 13.11 the 'separate group' does not belong to the staff member Stacey
• 13.19 were doing their things in the museum.-->doing their thing in the museum.
• 14.23 the museum of art & history --> the Museum of Art & History
• 15.01 you get excited--> you'll get excited
• 15:07 not have them--> not hand them
• You did a very good job on content and especially on the majority of the timing, given this speaker is a fast one.
• Please see differences here:
https://amara.org/es/videos/diffing/3929713/3926177/