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Unjust laws exist;
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shall we be content to obey them,
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or shall we endeavor to amend them,
and obey them until we have succeeded,
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or shall we transgress them at once?
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Henry David Thoreau
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A cofounder of the social, news and entertainment website Reddit has been found dead
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He certainly was a prodigy, although he never kind of thought of himself like that.
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He was totally unexcited
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about starting businesses and making money
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There's a profound sense of lost in Eiden Heilen Park,
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Aaron's Swartz's home town,
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as loved ones say good bye to one of the Internet's brightest lights
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Freedom, open access and computer activists are mourning his loss
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"An astonishing intellect", if you talk to people who knew him
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He was killed by the government
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and MIT betrayed all of its basic principles
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They wanted to make an example out of him
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The governments have insatiable desire to control
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He was potentially facing 35 years in prison
and a 1 million dollar fine
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Raising quesitons or prosecutorial zeal, and I would say even misconduct
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Have you looked into that particular matter and reached any conclusions?
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Growing up, you know, I slowly had this process of realising,
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that all the things around me, that people had told me
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were just the natural way things were, things always would be
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They weren't natural at all, there were things that could be changed
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and there were things that more importantly were wrong and should change.
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And once I realised that, there was really kind of no going back
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The Internet's Own Boy
cristi.magherusan
I think the English version is more or less complete now.
Let's review it and try to consistently apply the recommendations listed in the Guidelines box.
Bruno Treguier
Hi there,
I'm one of the French contributors to the French subtitles, and I noticed something that might be a (tiny) mistake in the English subtitles. Here are the present subtitles around 87:28:
87:28 - 87:31 I was a federal prosecutor at the Justice Department for three years.
87:31 - 87:34 Before I started teaching, the government came forward
87:34 - 87:38 with an indictment based on what crimes they thought were committed,
The guy's tone is a bit misleading, but there is a little silence after "teaching", sufficient for me to think that in fact, the first sentence stops there (and hence the 2nd begins), so IMHO he's in fact saying that:
1) he was a federal prosecutor for 3 years before he started teaching, and
2) the government came forward with an indictment based on what crimes they thought were committed, etc. etc.
So there should be a comma (or nothing) after "three years", and a full stop after "teaching".
Furthermore, with the present punctuation, the second sentence is a bit weird: why would it be important to state that the government came forward with Aaron's indictment before this guy started teaching ? Strange, isn't it ? ;-)
As one of the golden rules in subtitling is that only natives of a language should change the subtitles in that language, I leave it up to you to review my comments, and agree... or not. ;-)
Best regards,
Bruno
lauren3467
bruno.treguier Yeah, that makes much more sense. I think it's fixed now. Let me know if you find anything else.
Also, at 13:13 to 13:23, we had "LD documents" for the longest time, but I looked into it, and I'm pretty sure it should be "Eldred documents" so I changed it fairly recently. I'm not sure if it's been changed in the other languages, though.
http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/openlaw/eldredvashcroft/legal.html
It's great that this important documentary has been translated into so many languages!
Thanks :)
Bruno Treguier
Hi lauren3467,
I'll sure let you know if I notice something else that should be changed.
Regarding "LD" vs "Eldred", yeah, it's very difficult to catch what Aaron and his interviewer are precisely saying at that moment but I think you're perfectly right ! The "Eldred v. Ashcroft" oral argument at the Supreme Court, which precisely is about copyright, took place at the end of 2002/beginning of 2003, which fits perfectly !
Best regards,
Bruno