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Dialogue: 0,0:00:03.23,0:00:06.26,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,What would you guys say to teachers
Dialogue: 0,0:00:06.26,0:00:08.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,if they are not getting high quality work?
Dialogue: 0,0:00:08.60,0:00:09.81,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Could they learn something from this?
Dialogue: 0,0:00:09.81,0:00:12.85,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Or would you say they would learn differently in the classrooms?
Dialogue: 0,0:00:12.85,0:00:17.12,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,This is the story called Austin's Butterfly.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:17.12,0:00:21.21,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And it's a true story about a first grade boy, and his name is Austin.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:21.21,0:00:26.93,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And he goes to school, or used to go to school in a town called Boise, Idaho.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:26.93,0:00:32.65,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And in his class in Boise, Idaho, they were studying butterflies and he had to do a project.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:32.65,0:00:35.58,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,His job in the first grade was to draw a butterfly.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:35.58,0:00:38.07,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And this is the butterfly that he picked.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:38.79,0:00:41.33,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Austin had to use this photograph as his model,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:41.33,0:00:45.97,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,and he had to draw an accurate scientific drawing of this butterfly.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:45.97,0:00:48.08,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,This is called a Tiger Swallowtail.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:48.08,0:00:49.80,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Student: I knew it!
Dialogue: 0,0:00:49.80,0:00:51.88,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Can you tell Toby why it's called tiger?
Dialogue: 0,0:00:51.88,0:00:56.34,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Student: Because it kinda has the stripes of a tiger right there.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:56.34,0:00:59.25,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Good. So, here was Austin's job.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:59.25,0:01:02.82,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He was supposed to do a scientific drawing of that butterfly,
Dialogue: 0,0:01:02.82,0:01:05.03,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,but remember Austin was only in first grade.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:05.03,0:01:06.28,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And you know what he did?
Dialogue: 0,0:01:06.28,0:01:09.21,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He forgot to look like a scientist carefully.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:09.21,0:01:14.52,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He got his paper and he just started to draw the image of butterfly that he had in his head.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:14.52,0:01:18.84,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And he wasn't looking like a scientist, and so this is what he drew.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:19.82,0:01:22.53,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,It's not bad! And it is a butterfly.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:22.53,0:01:24.30,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,But does it look exactly like this?
Dialogue: 0,0:01:25.26,0:01:26.62,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Students: No...
Dialogue: 0,0:01:26.62,0:01:28.37,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,No, it doesn't yet.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:28.37,0:01:30.58,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,It doesn't look exactly like this yet.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:31.17,0:01:34.34,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Luckily, this wasn't the regular school where Austin went.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:34.34,0:01:37.80,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,It was an expeditionary learning school just like Presumpscot School.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:37.80,0:01:41.38,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And so they didn't look at this and say, "Good Austin! You're done!"
Dialogue: 0,0:01:41.38,0:01:46.11,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,They said, "Austin, good start! Now we can start giving you critiques,
Dialogue: 0,0:01:46.11,0:01:48.51,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,so you can do a second draft and make it better."
Dialogue: 0,0:01:48.51,0:01:52.74,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And a third draft and make it better and you can make it much much closer to this.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:52.74,0:01:53.99,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And he was ready to go.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:53.99,0:01:58.24,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,All of the first graders in his critique group sat on the floor like you guys are.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:58.24,0:02:01.25,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And they decided to split their advice into two kinds.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:01.25,0:02:04.59,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,First, just the shape of the wings.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:07.94,0:02:11.28,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And then when the shape was right, they give him advice about pattern inside the wings.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:11.28,0:02:12.17,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Aulia, what would you say?
Dialogue: 0,0:02:12.17,0:02:13.98,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,You could make it much pointier.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:13.98,0:02:16.58,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Good! These wings could be much pointier.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:16.58,0:02:17.76,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Who else would add something?
Dialogue: 0,0:02:17.76,0:02:18.97,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Etak, what would you say?
Dialogue: 0,0:02:18.97,0:02:20.53,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,How about the angle?
Dialogue: 0,0:02:20.53,0:02:25.40,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Because, not to be mean about the angle, it's just not exact. So, uh...
Dialogue: 0,0:02:25.40,0:02:27.52,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Okay! Show me! Come up here, Etak!
Dialogue: 0,0:02:27.52,0:02:30.68,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Show me where...what you would like to ask him to do just slightly differently.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:30.68,0:02:33.27,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Uh, like to make it little longer?
Dialogue: 0,0:02:33.27,0:02:35.01,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Longer where? Draw where you would do it.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:35.01,0:02:35.96,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Like right there.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:35.96,0:02:38.52,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Okay, so pull this out longer?
Dialogue: 0,0:02:38.52,0:02:39.02,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Yeah.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:39.02,0:02:40.96,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,That's very specific, Etak. Thank you.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:40.96,0:02:42.40,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Jemilla, what would you say?
Dialogue: 0,0:02:42.40,0:02:47.26,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,It's like... like...a... triangle?
Dialogue: 0,0:02:47.26,0:02:52.90,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Good. Jemilla, I love that. So you are saying more like a triangle shape. And I agree.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:52.90,0:02:57.32,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Well you know what, those first graders came up with most of those same ideas.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:57.32,0:02:59.24,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And you know what Austin said?
Dialogue: 0,0:02:59.24,0:03:05.23,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He said, "Ok! I will go try. And he went back to his seat. And he drew this!"
Dialogue: 0,0:03:05.23,0:03:07.08,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Wow! Wow~
Dialogue: 0,0:03:07.08,0:03:08.93,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Does this look more like a triangle?
Dialogue: 0,0:03:08.93,0:03:09.93,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Yeah...yeah.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:10.01,0:03:12.04,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Did he go out further like what Etak was suggesting?
Dialogue: 0,0:03:12.05,0:03:13.15,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Yeah...yes.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:13.17,0:03:15.83,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Did he add some jaggedness here, (yes) like Cindy?
Dialogue: 0,0:03:15.83,0:03:18.43,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Did he get rid of that bottom thing?
Dialogue: 0,0:03:18.43,0:03:19.12,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Yes.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:19.12,0:03:22.70,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,So he did listen to his friends and he made it better.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:22.70,0:03:24.86,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,It's not perfect. Toby, what would you say?
Dialogue: 0,0:03:24.86,0:03:32.78,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I would say don't put those little tail things so pointed in, I would say put them more pointed down.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:32.78,0:03:35.11,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Good! Ok. Ethan, what would you say?
Dialogue: 0,0:03:35.11,0:03:39.28,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I think you should make the wings more like this, not like this.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:39.28,0:03:39.66,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Okay.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:39.66,0:03:43.91,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He listened to his friends, and they said this is really a lot better Austin.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:43.91,0:03:46.05,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,That second draft really is better.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:46.05,0:03:47.91,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Maybe he can make a third one.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:47.91,0:03:50.94,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Good! Maybe he can make a third draft.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:52.05,0:03:53.33,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And so he did this draft.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:53.33,0:03:55.49,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,That's his third draft.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:55.49,0:03:58.49,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,That's his third draft. Hadley, that's just right.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:58.49,0:03:59.91,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Elijah, what do you notice there?
Dialogue: 0,0:03:59.91,0:04:07.69,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,One wing is more of a pointed than the other. And that side is a little bit higher than the others.
Dialogue: 0,0:04:07.69,0:04:08.24,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Good.
Dialogue: 0,0:04:08.24,0:04:10.06,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Cobern?
Dialogue: 0,0:04:10.06,0:04:13.82,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Right here, it doesn't have the inside thing still.
Dialogue: 0,0:04:13.82,0:04:17.31,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Ah! Okay! It needs a little bit more that notch.
Dialogue: 0,0:04:17.31,0:04:19.49,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,So, do you think maybe he should do a fourth draft?
Dialogue: 0,0:04:19.49,0:04:20.70,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Students: Yeah!
Dialogue: 0,0:04:20.70,0:04:21.96,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Well, that's just what he said.
Dialogue: 0,0:04:21.96,0:04:28.61,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He said, "Shoot! Okay. I got round again, I will go back and do the fourth draft."
Dialogue: 0,0:04:28.61,0:04:30.07,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He listened!
Dialogue: 0,0:04:30.07,0:04:34.11,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He listened! Does it look more even like what Elijah was suggesting?
Dialogue: 0,0:04:34.11,0:04:35.77,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Yes! Yeah!
Dialogue: 0,0:04:35.77,0:04:38.88,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And does it look like coming out a little sharper like Cindy was suggesting?
Dialogue: 0,0:04:39.57,0:04:43.63,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And like Etak was saying, the angle looks a little better.
Dialogue: 0,0:04:43.63,0:04:46.66,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,So now Austin was feeling really good.
Dialogue: 0,0:04:46.66,0:04:48.100,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He said, " Am I ready to add some pattern?"
Dialogue: 0,0:04:48.100,0:04:54.63,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And they said, "Okay. Why don't you try adding some of the pattern?"
Dialogue: 0,0:04:54.63,0:04:57.10,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And he did!
Dialogue: 0,0:04:57.10,0:04:58.46,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He's good at it.
Dialogue: 0,0:04:58.46,0:05:00.43,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He's so good.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:00.43,0:05:03.23,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And then they said, "Austin, you are ready for color."
Dialogue: 0,0:05:03.25,0:05:07.25,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Let's look at his last draft.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:07.25,0:05:10.09,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And what do you think? Did it come out really good?
Dialogue: 0,0:05:10.09,0:05:13.30,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Students: Yeah! Yeah!
Dialogue: 0,0:05:13.30,0:05:16.45,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Let me show you where he started, just to give you a quick reminder.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:16.45,0:05:22.11,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And then, what do you think about how much progress he made?
Dialogue: 0,0:05:22.11,0:05:24.12,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Etak, what would you say about his progress?
Dialogue: 0,0:05:24.12,0:05:26.35,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He made a lot of progress.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:26.35,0:05:28.54,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He persevered doing it.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:28.54,0:05:32.16,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Um, his friends were honest with him.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:32.16,0:05:38.62,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,What was about the kinds of advice that they gave that allowed him to get better each time?
Dialogue: 0,0:05:38.62,0:05:39.53,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Assahn?
Dialogue: 0,0:05:39.53,0:05:42.64,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Well, they told him what was wrong about it.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:42.64,0:05:45.79,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Did they said it was just wrong or were they more specific than that?
Dialogue: 0,0:05:45.79,0:05:48.47,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,They were more specific, but they weren't mean about it.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:48.47,0:05:50.42,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Great!
Dialogue: 0,0:05:50.42,0:05:51.45,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Hadley.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:51.45,0:05:53.18,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He made six drafts.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:53.18,0:05:56.04,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And so is that something that other kids should learn from?
Dialogue: 0,0:05:56.04,0:05:57.34,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,What should we learn from that?
Dialogue: 0,0:05:57.34,0:06:01.32,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,You can make other drafts if it's not right.
Dialogue: 0,0:06:01.32,0:06:01.86,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Good.
Dialogue: 0,0:06:01.86,0:06:05.43,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,So if it's not right, you can keep doing more drafts to make it better.
Dialogue: 0,0:06:05.43,0:06:07.99,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And you just don't use things in your head,
Dialogue: 0,0:06:07.99,0:06:09.57,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,you want to use sharp eye.
Dialogue: 0,0:06:09.59,0:06:12.71,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Good! He used the eyes of a scientist.
Dialogue: 0,0:06:12.71,0:06:13.35,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Great.