1 00:00:14,026 --> 00:00:16,496 “I am an invisible man.” 2 00:00:16,496 --> 00:00:20,728 “Mrs. Dalloway said she would buy the flowers herself.” 3 00:00:20,728 --> 00:00:24,777 “You are about to begin reading Italo Calvino's new novel.” 4 00:00:26,370 --> 00:00:30,742 These three opening lines, from Ralph Ellison’s "Invisible Man," 5 00:00:30,742 --> 00:00:32,762 Virginia Woolf’s "Mrs. Dalloway," 6 00:00:32,762 --> 00:00:36,562 and Italo Calvino’s "If on a winter’s night a traveler," 7 00:00:36,562 --> 00:00:39,682 each establish a different point of view. 8 00:00:39,682 --> 00:00:42,892 Who is telling a story, and from what perspective, 9 00:00:42,892 --> 00:00:46,412 are some of the most important choices an author makes. 10 00:00:46,412 --> 00:00:50,544 Told from a different point of view, a story can transform completely. 11 00:00:52,504 --> 00:00:54,360 Take this fairytale: 12 00:00:54,360 --> 00:00:59,820 "Rapunzel, Rapunzel," the Prince called, "let down your hair." 13 00:00:59,820 --> 00:01:03,350 Rapunzel unbraided her hair and slung it out the window. 14 00:01:03,350 --> 00:01:06,420 The prince climbed her tresses into the tower. 15 00:01:06,420 --> 00:01:11,064 Rapunzel is typically told like this, with the narrator outside the story. 16 00:01:11,064 --> 00:01:14,164 This point of view is called third person. 17 00:01:14,164 --> 00:01:18,044 But Rapunzel can also be told by a character in the story— 18 00:01:18,044 --> 00:01:19,854 a first person narrator. 19 00:01:19,854 --> 00:01:23,284 The tail end of Rapunzel’s locks plopped down at my feet. 20 00:01:23,284 --> 00:01:26,614 I grabbed on and began to climb… ugh! 21 00:01:26,614 --> 00:01:28,694 I couldn’t untangle myself. 22 00:01:28,694 --> 00:01:32,404 Strands came off all over me, sticking to my sweat. 23 00:01:32,404 --> 00:01:36,460 In a first person narrative, the story can change dramatically 24 00:01:36,460 --> 00:01:40,636 depending on which character is the narrator. 25 00:01:40,636 --> 00:01:44,366 Say Rapunzel was narrating instead of the prince: 26 00:01:44,366 --> 00:01:51,255 I hope he appreciates how long it takes to unbraid 25 feet of hair, I thought. 27 00:01:51,255 --> 00:01:56,212 OUCH! I'll be honest; I thought my scalp would stretch off of my skull. 28 00:01:56,212 --> 00:02:00,212 "Can you climb any faster?" I yelled. 29 00:02:00,212 --> 00:02:04,801 In second person, the narrator addresses the story to the reader: 30 00:02:04,801 --> 00:02:09,892 He calls your name. He wants you to let your hair down. 31 00:02:09,892 --> 00:02:14,350 You just finished braiding it, but hey– you don't get a lot of visitors. 32 00:02:14,350 --> 00:02:18,230 Third person, first person, and second person perspectives 33 00:02:18,230 --> 00:02:21,740 each have unique possibilities and constraints. 34 00:02:21,740 --> 00:02:25,740 So how do you choose a point of view for your story? 35 00:02:25,740 --> 00:02:28,400 Constraints aren’t necessarily a bad thing— 36 00:02:28,400 --> 00:02:32,946 they can help focus a story or highlight certain elements. 37 00:02:32,946 --> 00:02:34,106 For example, 38 00:02:34,106 --> 00:02:39,024 a third person narrator is necessarily a bit removed from the characters. 39 00:02:39,024 --> 00:02:43,156 But that can be good for stories where a feeling of distance is important. 40 00:02:43,156 --> 00:02:46,636 A third person narrator can be either limited, 41 00:02:46,636 --> 00:02:50,516 meaning they stick close to one character’s thoughts and feelings, 42 00:02:50,516 --> 00:02:54,446 or they can be omniscient, able to flit between characters’ minds 43 00:02:54,446 --> 00:02:57,295 and give the reader more information. 44 00:02:57,295 --> 00:03:02,170 A first person story creates closeness between the reader and the narrator. 45 00:03:02,170 --> 00:03:05,480 It’s also restricted by the narrator’s knowledge. 46 00:03:05,480 --> 00:03:07,010 This can create suspense 47 00:03:07,010 --> 00:03:10,920 as the reader finds out information along with the character. 48 00:03:10,920 --> 00:03:13,180 A first person narrator doesn’t necessarily 49 00:03:13,180 --> 00:03:16,340 have to represent the character’s experience faithfully— 50 00:03:16,340 --> 00:03:19,360 they can be delusional or dishonest. 51 00:03:19,360 --> 00:03:22,744 In Kazuo Ishiguro’s novel "The Remains of the Day," 52 00:03:22,744 --> 00:03:29,292 Stevens, an aging British butler in 1956, recounts his many years of service, 53 00:03:29,292 --> 00:03:33,292 but fails to acknowledge the flaws of the man he serves. 54 00:03:33,292 --> 00:03:37,042 The cracks in his narrative eventually draw the reader’s attention 55 00:03:37,042 --> 00:03:41,025 to the under-acknowledged failings of the culture and class system 56 00:03:41,025 --> 00:03:42,625 he inhabits. 57 00:03:42,625 --> 00:03:45,595 Justin Torres’s novel, "We the Animals," 58 00:03:45,595 --> 00:03:48,895 begins with a plural first person narrator: 59 00:03:48,895 --> 00:03:52,705 “We were six snatching hands, six stomping feet; 60 00:03:52,705 --> 00:03:58,542 we were brothers, boys, three little kings locked in a feud for more.” 61 00:03:58,542 --> 00:04:01,587 Partway through the story, the point of view shifts 62 00:04:01,587 --> 00:04:06,577 to first person singular, from we to I, as the boys come of age 63 00:04:06,577 --> 00:04:10,677 and one brother feels alienated from the others. 64 00:04:10,677 --> 00:04:13,697 Second person is a less common choice. 65 00:04:13,697 --> 00:04:18,511 It requires the writer to make the reader suspend disbelief to become another “you.” 66 00:04:18,511 --> 00:04:21,201 Placing the reader in a character’s perspective 67 00:04:21,201 --> 00:04:23,621 can build urgency and suspense. 68 00:04:23,621 --> 00:04:24,791 Sometimes, though, 69 00:04:24,791 --> 00:04:28,937 second person is intended to distance the narrator from their own story, 70 00:04:28,937 --> 00:04:31,677 rather than bring the reader closer to the story. 71 00:04:31,677 --> 00:04:32,807 In these cases, 72 00:04:32,807 --> 00:04:37,881 second person narrators refer to themselves as “you” rather than “I.” 73 00:04:37,881 --> 00:04:43,082 Writers are constantly experimenting with fresh variations on point of view. 74 00:04:43,082 --> 00:04:46,150 New virtual and augmented reality technologies 75 00:04:46,150 --> 00:04:49,730 may expand the possibilities for this experimentation. 76 00:04:49,730 --> 00:04:53,730 By placing people at a particular vantage point in virtual space, 77 00:04:53,730 --> 00:04:57,590 how might we change the way we tell and experience stories?