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Example 01 Feedback Essay (VideoForAll)

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    Yeah, I just want to provide you with a little bit of feedback on your essay,
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    and the first thing I want to point out is, if we come down to here,
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    I was noticing that you were talking about --
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    I think you're not describing very clearly, exactly what screen capture does,
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    and I think its very important that we explain that
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    if you highlight anything,
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    if you write anything, if you move your cursor
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    on the screen, on the student's written work,
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    then that comes out in the essay:
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    because I don't think you're making that point very clearly, here.
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    So I think you might need to re-think that point.
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    Another little point I just want to bring up is here:
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    you used the word "live".
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    Now, I think "live" is not really the right word,
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    I think that you need to explain it's not a live recording,
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    because obviously, the student is playing it back after the teacher has made the recording,
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    but what it is more is a conference,
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    it's very similar to conferencing in a way that
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    it kind of feels like the teacher is sitting next to you,
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    going through your work and explaining some of the mistakes.
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    So, maybe I think, here it's the wrong choice of word
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    and you might need to think about that as well.
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    I think, one of the things here is you've pointed out different screen capture tools,
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    and it might be a good idea that when you point out these tools,
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    to talk about which tools are free and which tools are paid,
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    because JING is a free tool, but Camtasia certainly will cost teachers a hundred and --
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    I think it's about 170, 180 dollars to buy.
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    So I think it would be useful to provide that information in your essay.
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Example 01 Feedback Essay (VideoForAll)
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