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Dialogue: 0,0:00:00.53,0:00:04.08,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Yeah, I just want to provide you with a little bit of feedback on your essay,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:04.08,0:00:06.69,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,and the first thing I want to point out is, if we come down to here,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:06.69,0:00:10.35,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I was noticing that you were talking about --
Dialogue: 0,0:00:10.35,0:00:16.22,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I think you're not describing very clearly, exactly what screen capture does,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:16.22,0:00:18.05,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,and I think its very important that we explain that
Dialogue: 0,0:00:18.05,0:00:19.46,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,if you highlight anything,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:19.46,0:00:22.27,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,if you write anything, if you move your cursor
Dialogue: 0,0:00:22.27,0:00:25.12,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,on the screen, on the student's written work,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:25.12,0:00:27.30,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,then that comes out in the essay:
Dialogue: 0,0:00:27.30,0:00:30.02,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,because I don't think you're making that point very clearly, here.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:30.02,0:00:33.21,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,So I think you might need to re-think that point.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:33.21,0:00:35.69,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Another little point I just want to bring up is here:
Dialogue: 0,0:00:35.69,0:00:37.17,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,you used the word "live".
Dialogue: 0,0:00:37.17,0:00:40.22,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Now, I think "live" is not really the right word,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:40.60,0:00:43.42,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I think that you need to explain it's not a live recording,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:43.42,0:00:47.32,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,because obviously, the student is playing it back after the teacher has made the recording,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:47.32,0:00:49.73,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,but what it is more is a conference,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:49.73,0:00:52.36,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,it's very similar to conferencing in a way that
Dialogue: 0,0:00:52.36,0:00:54.54,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,it kind of feels like the teacher is sitting next to you,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:54.54,0:00:57.04,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,going through your work and explaining some of the mistakes.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:57.04,0:01:00.67,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,So, maybe I think, here it's the wrong choice of word
Dialogue: 0,0:01:00.67,0:01:03.41,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,and you might need to think about that as well.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:04.32,0:01:08.96,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I think, one of the things here is you've pointed out different screen capture tools,
Dialogue: 0,0:01:08.96,0:01:12.41,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,and it might be a good idea that when you point out these tools,
Dialogue: 0,0:01:12.41,0:01:18.36,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,to talk about which tools are free and which tools are paid,
Dialogue: 0,0:01:18.36,0:01:25.84,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,because JING is a free tool, but Camtasia certainly will cost teachers a hundred and --
Dialogue: 0,0:01:25.84,0:01:29.01,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I think it's about 170, 180 dollars to buy.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:29.01,0:01:33.03,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,So I think it would be useful to provide that information in your essay.